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Post by imaginaryworld on Apr 20, 2006 12:44:40 GMT -5
Thanks!!! I never knew you liked my songs/poems so much. Now you're my new inspiration to write. *hugs*
This song is called "What's Wrong Now?"
When you take my sadness away I feel the hope in you and I am caught in dreams that won't leave me alone But this is real as you and I Or the silver in a precious dime Thrown in deep waters that will be lingering there
And you make me understand why people fall in love with the first words they say When they look deep in each ones' eyes I know, darling, but I can see your's Can you see my eyes? even though a picture is not guiding you with the features that belong to me
Keep me in your thoughts and don't throw me away Even when you're sick of me It's coming quite quickly
And I'm waiting for you to come What's wrong now? I'll stay In June when love is blooming clear What's wrong now? Don't be afraid
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Post by Moonchild10 on Apr 20, 2006 22:57:17 GMT -5
I love the way that flows! ^_^ Your poetry is awesome!
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imaginaryworld
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Post by imaginaryworld on Apr 21, 2006 10:28:16 GMT -5
I admit, I am getting WAY better at my writing. But I want to go farther. I'm not still impressed with it all that much.
This song is called, "Honey this is nothing."
The rain keeps falling on top of my head And crowning me with the water of dreams and journeys Don't ask me why, why I'm doing this But I have no clue either why I'm walking away From the hearts that gave me, gave me something But honey this is nothing
I've been waiting for this all my life For the meaning and light of the sun Don't hold me down, hold me down This what I'll do, what I'll do But honey this is nothing
(chorus) When I hear you cry all through the midsummer night Something tells me to comfort you But it's not that simple You're impossible to handle even in my arms Tell me light is coming And the tears just keep running
And I don't need you anymore to guide me I know that you were beside me but We're going down, going down All they way to the ground, the ground But honey this is nothing
We're quiet in hiding I know that you were behind me but We're sleeping now, sleeping now In the hollow town, hollow town But honey this is nothing
(chorus) When I hear you cry all through the midsummer night Something tells me to comfort you But it's not that simple You're impossible to handle even in my arms Tell me light is coming And the tears just keep running
This is nothing, ah ah ah ah, surely not something, ah ah ah ah [2x]
nothing now, nothing now We're going down, going down Ah lala nothing now, nothing now We're going down, going down
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Apr 21, 2006 19:51:10 GMT -5
Thanks!!! I never knew you liked my songs/poems so much. Now you're my new inspiration to write. *hugs* This song is called "What's Wrong Now?" When you take my sadness away I feel the hope in you and I am caught in dreams that won't leave me alone But this is real as you and I Or the silver in a precious dime Thrown in deep waters that will be lingering there And you make me understand why people fall in love with the first words they say When they look deep in each ones' eyes I know, darling, but I can see your's Can you see my eyes? even though a picture is not guiding you with the features that belong to me Keep me in your thoughts and don't throw me away Even when you're sick of me It's coming quite quickly And I'm waiting for you to come What's wrong now? I'll stay In June when love is blooming clear What's wrong now? Don't be afraid *hugs back* WOO. ^___^ & I loved it. It was so sad; A weird kind of sad I'm not used to; Like, not my usual self-pitiness sad, and not the over-dramatic sob-story sad, but just.. i dont know. SAD.
& i'll post something soon. just dont wanna travel upstairs to find something ive written.
see, the thing with me is, no matter what i do, i hate whatever i write once im not feeling the same way anymore. i reeeallly do. so i dont care anymore how it sounds; if i feel it works for the moment, then it's good enough.. and if it works after that, too.. well then im so happy i could cry. ;]
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Apr 21, 2006 20:35:49 GMT -5
small clippings of stiinnkkyy poems:
"you're like my nast plauge personally making life a hell. the secret curse i hate to share so nobody can tell."
"id hate to be a burdon, & youd hate to come along my regret wont bring you back & my TEEN ANGST wont write a song."
"your pathetic attemps @ meaning are futile & shallow. youre a liar and a fake and almost everything i hate ..but nothing i dont love."
"We never seemed so lost; i never was your star; you never seem to notice how we've never seemed so far..."
[some random friend-poem clipping]: "when i cant hold in the tears and im feeling extra small, you're the one who will be there to catch me as i fall.
when ive stopped holding on & given up by day's end, youre there, holding for me my true and faithful friend."
oohh, look at that.. i didnt end up editing my post.. >;]
actually, theyre not that bad. but whatever, tell me what you think of em.. =/
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imaginaryworld
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Post by imaginaryworld on Apr 23, 2006 11:21:28 GMT -5
WOW. I'm know I'm gonna sound stupid. But. Those were the bomb!!! Since those are just clippings, can post the rest of it? They sound awesome!
This song is called "A Long Way From Home."
This song is kinda based on a book I'm reading now. Daughter Of The Forest. Cool book!!!! READ IT. I wrote it out of different things about people in the book and the main character, Sorcha.
(part for Simon and Sorcha trying to comfort him) Honey, lay slow in gentle thoughts I'll sleep close to you tonight Helping you fight the demons close by your bedside Grab my hand and wonder deep in imaginizing perfect dreams
(chorus) (Part for Sorcha and where she's staying and what people think about her) And life seems to get harder now since I've been here Understand that I won't complete the goal in my life But it only causes you pain and to everyone around you Thinks of me as a witch, a strong sorceress And it makes it worse that I'm a long way from home
(part for John when Sorcha regrets going out of the house and getting a special herb for six shirts for her brothers) Now that you're gone Everyone blames it on me, and Now I'm believing it's really true and I Will be the one to form a mourning for you, just you and me
(chorus) (Sorcha) And life seems to get harder since I've been here Understand that I won't complete my goal in life But it only causes you pain and to everyone around you Thinks of me as a witch, a strong sorceress And it makes it worse that I'm a long way from home
(Having difficulty on where to go and the affect of Red not liking her and thinking that that is the problem with him ) What should I do? It's only affecting you and me But going home means no love alone Only to see that everyones changed By these three years, I'm of different culture Around different people who hate me
(chorus) (Sorcha) And life seems to get harder now since I've been here Understand that I won't complete the goal in my life But it only causes you pain and to everyone around you Thinks of me as a witch, a strong sorceress And it makes it worse that I'm a long way from home
(Sorcha's downsides in life) I'm a long way from home, from the people that I know And it just goes to show, that my life is nothing at all But a walking down slope
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Post by Moonchild10 on Apr 25, 2006 22:13:23 GMT -5
You both write awesome poetry! ^_^
I'm a little depressed at the moment, and so I must jot down a couple of poems. Makes me feel better (warning, they're not going to be good, I'll tell you that)
I kill what I love And love what I kill I can't change myself And I never will Something is broken Something is wrong Something just won't shut off Although I am gone I'm not a rock I'm just a machine Living a lie or living a dream I want to shut off I want to pretend I want to believe You'll be here in the end I've lost my way You've lost your sight Now we're no more Than strangers in the night I don't want to heal I don't want to mend I just want to know that when it's over You'll still be my friend
Blah, random writing spurts are weird. ^_^
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imaginaryworld
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Post by imaginaryworld on Apr 26, 2006 13:04:35 GMT -5
What are you talking about!? That was cool! In my opinion, that was one of the most awesome poems I've seen you write. It was sad, but the wording was meaningful and deep. Keep it up!
This song is called "Slow It Down."
I don't know what to think of myself anymore It seems there's nothing I can do But die and still live a little for you But there's no way, no way I could Find me a reason not too
(chorus) Nothing means nothing to do Help me with what you should Time is stuck for the time And life seems to go faster still
Washing away the marks that never should The romance that never could Love and lies around the mind Erase it from a place to find Find me a reason not too
(chorus) Nothing means nothing to do Help me with what you should Time is stuck for the time And life seems to go faster still
There's no way, oh no way, there's no way, ah, still no way [3x]
(chorus) Nothing means nothing to do Help me with what you should Time is stuck for the time And life seems to go faster still
Slow it down, slow it down, slow it down for the both of us [5x]
(chorus) Nothing means nothing to do Help me with what you should Time is stuck for the time And life seems to go faster still
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Apr 28, 2006 17:30:14 GMT -5
ohh, i loved those last two poems/songs! they were so good. Imaginaryworld, I kinda imagined your's as a punk song. And it made me love it even more!! IT WAS SO GOOD!!
k i just wrote a song, and i actually like it. its punkish-alternative-rock. its more angsty than sad, but its kinda sad to me, so whatever, here it is:
"Dont get So Carried Away with Yourself
havent you seen me yet, standing here waiting for your goddamn consent? tonight my heart is on my sleeve and my foot is in your mouth
if i had seen you here, id wish for your tradgic ass to disappear ill start your fires in the breeze and show you whos got power now
[chorus] even if you were but a day late i couldnt except this narrow-minded fate no more destiny, none of it exists want to solve the problem with words or fists?
and its not quite the same, that i have to sit here waiting in this stupid game. we arent who we were when the tables were so turned
just in case in you didnt realize, i have just barely learned to recognize we arent who were then we arent. we arent.
[chorus] even if you were but a day late i couldnt except this narrow-minded fate no more destiny, none of it exists we can solve this all with words but id rather use my fist.
why can i just forget the person i thought i was so i could just move on without regrets? we're choking ever breath out but its nothing to worry about
and in case it wasnt obvious i cant live up to this suddon burst of confidence. just to even up the score you're not coming home tonight "[or ever again]"
[chorus] even if you were but a day late i couldnt except this narrow-minded fate no more destiny, none of it exists we can solve this all with words but id rather use my fist.
even if you were but a day late i couldnt except this narrow-minded fate no more destiny, none of it exists we can solve this all with words but id rather use my fist.
just in case in you didnt realize, i have just barely learned to recognize we arent who were then we arent. we arent. we're not anymore.
ahh, if my band really starts to get serious, this is the 1st song im writing music for.
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imaginaryworld
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Post by imaginaryworld on Apr 29, 2006 15:42:42 GMT -5
Holy crap! That was amazing! Serious. Yes. But also full of passion and deep feelings. Niiiiccccceeeeee!!!
This song is called "Again." It may seem "different" to other songs I wrote, but I like it. Somewhat.
I just had a dream of our sanctuary Gotta go find it now My heart is beating uncontrolably, so crazy (Don't go, don't go) Those whispers again
Rushing out of the door Finding reason in our lives Something tells me not to go, so crazy (Don't go, don't go) Those whispers again
(chorus) And the memories came flooding back Of the nights I held your hand Telling you not to leave me "This is our place to be Don't leave me I'm happy here"
I know I shouldn't go to our place We're over My eyes replay the days when we'll sing, so crazy (Don't go, don't go) Those whispers again
Someone stop me My mind is controling my feet And it's hurting me No shoes on me Just like the way we'd run on the sand and sea (Don't go, don't go) Those whispers again
(chorus) And the memories came flooding back Of the nights I held your hand Telling you not to leave me "This is our place to be Don't leave me I'm happy here"
(Don't go, don't go, heartache is waiting for you there) Those whispers again (Don't go, don't go, heartache should change your mind) Stop me again (Don't go, don't go, let the air move through your throte) Help me again (Don't go, don't go, everything is okay now for you) Thank you again (for everything) Yes, for everything
Lay low, lay low, I'm not gonna go, oh no Up high, up high, forget those nights
My voices again Thank you for everything
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Apr 30, 2006 17:24:03 GMT -5
that was so freaking GREAT.
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Post by imaginaryworld on May 3, 2006 12:28:19 GMT -5
Really? I thought it sucked........like everything else I write. j/k. It was okay.
(chorus) Do you know how many times I dream of you? How many times I think I see you? Everyday Let's keep counting It's reaching higher than the number of times I said "I love you."
It's night, gotta go to sleep Thinkin' I'll die by the pain And never seeing you again makes it worse You're my only comfort even though you're not there It's as close as I can get to you
(chorus) Do you know how many times I dream of you? How many times I think I see you? Everyday Let's keep counting It's reaching higher than the number of times I said "I love you."
Don't blame me please It's just cuz of the way I feel for you And the thought of never seeing you It's too much to think about right now It's as close as I can get to you.
(chorus) Do you know how many times I dream of you? How many times I think I see you? Everyday Let's keep counting It's reaching higher than the number of times I said "I love you."
It's just because I need you, it's just because it's what I feel for you It still makes me cry but there's nothing I can do
(chorus) Do you know how many times I dream of you? How many times I think I see you? Everyday Let's keep counting It's reaching higher than the number of times I said "I love you."
(chorus) Do you know how many times I dream of you? How many times I think I see you? Everyday Let's keep counting It's reaching higher than the number of times I said "I love you."
It's just because I need you, it's just because it's what I feel for you It still makes me cry but there's nothing I can do
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imaginaryworld
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Post by imaginaryworld on May 5, 2006 16:07:01 GMT -5
Lazy, lazy, lazy me.
This song is called "Find Me A Way."
What's wrong with me? I know that I will never be happy again It's just that I lost you Is it really that unbeliveable? Why is it then that I have a light of hope within me still? It's not like I'll be with you again
I can't find my way out of here It's just that the mist is still unclear Find me a way to fight it with you
One more time, one more time, one more time
Find me a way to fight it with you Just one more time
(chorus) I know that I should just forget you But I'm having the trouble that haunts me Every night, it's something new Every night, it's something worse Time to reach out, but I couldn't It's so far, and yet so close to my heart It's tearing it, and there's no one to sew it up
What's new with me? Blood stained pages from the poems I write for you But the blood is fading to pink, the tears have made holes in the words Love, you, me, hug, kiss, heart, destiny The things that are most important Have holes in the meaning of what was intended
I can't find my way out of here It's just that the mist is still unclear Find me a way to fight it with you
One more time, one more time, one more time
Find me a way to fight it with you Just one more time
(chorus) I know that I should just forget you But I'm having the trouble that haunts me Every night, it's something new Every night, it's something worse Time to reach out, but I couldn't It's so far, and yet so close to my heart It's tearing it, and there's no one to sew it up
(what's wrong with me? What's wrong with me? There's nothing to see. What's wrong with me?)
Why is it then that I have a light of hope within me still? It's not like I'll be with you again
(Never again)
(chorus) I know that I should just forget you But I'm having the trouble that haunts me Every night, it's something new Every night, it's something worse Time to reach out, but I couldn't It's so far, and yet so close to my heart It's tearing it, and there's no one to sew it up
I can't find my way out of here It's just that the mist is still unclear Find me a way to fight it with you
One more time, one more time, one more time
Find me a way to fight it with you Just one more time
Find me a way Find me some way Find me a way Find it someday
A way to fight it with you
One more time, one more time, just one more moment of time And then I'll prove it to you There'll be a way to fight it with you But only one more moment of time
To fight the world with you
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Post by )**..(Namine)..**( on May 6, 2006 17:13:43 GMT -5
OH!that is a great 1 imaginaryworld!please continue ^____________^
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on May 7, 2006 11:48:02 GMT -5
i love your poems and songs so much, Makenzie.
please continue!! i havent written anything in a while, nothing comes out good. =/
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