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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Aug 16, 2005 10:48:26 GMT -5
Post all of your sad poems here.
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Post by imaginaryworld on Aug 16, 2005 20:37:26 GMT -5
It's called "souls" not that special. I just quickly made it up.
Sad souls covers up it's true emotions with happiness and love, but inside it's lonely and depressed. They wear a mask and is afraid to let the true person out.
They're insanity can't hold in anymore and slowly cracks.
The people see and the soul is frightened and runs away from them.
They hold themselves and slowy slip away from reality.
They build they're own world and pretend everything is okay.
But they know it's all insane.
They hold in they're thoughts until they're completely okay.
But they know they can't pretend anymore and slowly go insane once again.
They're scared of being rejected.
But why are they afraid when they already have?
Cuz they know if they're no longer rejected it can happen again.
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Aug 17, 2005 21:31:01 GMT -5
I loved it; Reminded me of me...perfectly.
you're good; You have a lot of talent, dont sell yourself short.
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Post by imaginaryworld on Aug 19, 2005 16:13:02 GMT -5
Thx Jess!
I'll try to think of some more! ^^
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Post by bshadow on Aug 19, 2005 19:27:03 GMT -5
:DI totally agree with Jes
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Post by coolcatjas on Aug 19, 2005 21:31:45 GMT -5
awesome! I luv the poem! It's really something. u quickly made that up?! DUDE! I wonder how good a poem u make will be if you took more time. It will be really special, I bet.
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Aug 20, 2005 17:23:03 GMT -5
I second that bet. you're good.
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Post by imaginaryworld on Aug 20, 2005 18:24:23 GMT -5
It wasn't that good..............-_-;; I gots another... it's called "glum"
I told you so many times there is no need to fear.
But why are still shaking?
Am I that unprotective?
I guess no matter how hard I try I am still as scared as you.
I can only try to comfort, but I only bring more fear.
Tears and sadness loop over my heart and it make these scars that I can no longer erease.
The years go on and I die with pain.
For you are gone, and I wait for you in the shadowy graves until the Earth turns to dust and ashes.
I still wait for you with a glum face as Heaven lifts my spirit away.
I know now that you will never return.
My hope has been broken.
You've shown me that hope is meaningless and useless...
For it never works....
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Post by coolcatjas on Aug 20, 2005 21:39:56 GMT -5
sad... will I guess that's why u post it here =^.^=; you've got to be a pro. How long have you been writing poetry?
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Post by imaginaryworld on Aug 21, 2005 10:39:03 GMT -5
Not.......long........I guess....less than a year though.....I still don't see what's so special bout' my poems........-_-;;
Anywho..........here's another....
It's called "You". Yeah, I know corny name.....
I know that I am sad, but you don't care for me at all.
If I'm lonely or depressed, you turn the other way and avoid my every need.
My memories with you, now that I think, were nothing great.
I can do better by myself.
I don't need someone to share moments with, for I have myself.
I can sit in the rain and be cold and it's still better than you.
The rain washes my pain away.
The pain was only caused by you.
For you don't care for me, as long as your happy, you think everything is okay.
Maybe for you, but not for me.
As time quickens, my heart still aches.
Maybe I misunderstood our time together.
That could have been just it.
But now that I am dead, my memories fade.
And so I carry on.....
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Aug 25, 2005 17:56:41 GMT -5
Neither of the last two made sense to me. But they still make more sense than the first poems I ever wrote. They were so random, lol.
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Post by imaginaryworld on Aug 26, 2005 18:31:55 GMT -5
They didn't make sense? How so?
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Aug 31, 2005 17:44:49 GMT -5
Actually I do I think maybe I was reading the comments in between. lol
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Post by coolcatjas on Aug 31, 2005 20:49:39 GMT -5
lol
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Post by imaginaryworld on Sept 3, 2005 12:07:05 GMT -5
*laughs* ^^
Okay, this is called "waiting for you".
I only see darkness coming closer to my soul.
It feels like there's no way to escape.
I can't even have a hint of saneness anyore, for my madness has crept out.
After that, you have never spoken a word to me.
I know I might be different, but is it all that bad?
I never chose to be this way, but it's just who I am.
Now I am alone, you think you know who I am.
But you don't, I'm intirely different than what you think.
I still love you, but I'm afraid you don't feel the same anymore.
I will wait as long as I have too.
I love you that much.
So please tell me, do you still feel the same?
If you don't, I know my waiting is over.
You will be happy without me........while I still love you....
It sucked........whatever......-_-''
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