|
Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Sept 19, 2005 16:13:08 GMT -5
My fanfic! I hope you all love it, and if you don't, No, I'm kidding. You are Averyl, a sweet girl who never wants to be a burden to anyone. You don't have any friends, and you try to stay out of everyones way. You don't like to talk about yourself, and you always try to fight through every day. In the morning, you wake up, happy to be alive. In the day, you go around, trying to have fun. At night, you go to sleep, wishing that you would wake up tomorrw alive. This is your story. "No." you whisper. You could feel yourself getting tired as the pain in your body grows. You try to keep walking. You gasp as your body stops moving and you hit the ground. You lie there, feeling the rain hit you."Please, not now." you cry. Tears start to work their way down your cheeks. You feel all the warmth you had start to leave. You bring your knees to your chest, explosions of pain running through you. You shake in cold. You black out as you see someone running over to you. Your head falls and hits the ground and you sigh, blacking out."Please." you whisper. Okay, what do you think?
|
|
|
Post by Mauser on Sept 20, 2005 19:10:26 GMT -5
i don't know where this is going but it's a good start.
|
|
|
Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Sept 20, 2005 19:17:55 GMT -5
You'll see soon, when I get to write some more. Oh, yeah, Averyl has a huge secret, but you won;t know what until later!
|
|
teentitansgo1yahoocom
Guest
|
Post by teentitansgo1yahoocom on Sept 21, 2005 16:47:59 GMT -5
where is the fic
|
|
teentitansgo1yahoocom
Guest
|
Post by teentitansgo1yahoocom on Sept 21, 2005 16:48:28 GMT -5
where is the fic
|
|
|
Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Sept 21, 2005 17:17:52 GMT -5
What?
|
|
|
Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Sept 21, 2005 17:35:16 GMT -5
"Is she going to be okay?" you hear a voice ask. "Yeah, she had hypothermia, but it's gone. I wanted to check her head for hits, but RAven would let me take off that head thing. She said it might be for religious things. The rest of her body looks good though." You slowly open your eyes to find that you are lying in a white room with beds to either side of you. You were in a bed with a big blanket on you. "Look, she's up." Robin and Cyborg turn to you. "Where am I?" you ask, finding it hard to talk because you were so thirsty. Cyborg hands you a glass of water."Would you mind if asked you to take this blanket off of me?" Cyborg nods and pulls it off. With alot of pain, you sit up and down the water. "You're in Titans tower. I found you lying in the rain last night." Robin explains."Why were you there?" "I was just trying to get some where." You weren't about to say where though. You look down, happy and relieved to see that you were still in your clothes, a black tank top that said sweet but deadly with a picture of a cute little girl with red horns and a tail, and short, cut off light blue jean shorts. "Why did you fall?" You look up at Robin. "Do you have any food, please?" you ask. "Yes, but I was asking-" "Yeah, come on, I'll show you the living room." Cyborg says, giving Robin a talk about it later or I'll throw you to a crowd of fangirls look. Robin look at him with wide eyes and nods. Cyborg helps you out of the bed and just by moving pain starts to grow. The two of them help you out of the room and into a dark hall. They lead you down the long hall, and you come to a door.
Leaving you there!
|
|
|
Post by coffee hype on Sept 23, 2005 15:57:03 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]MUST HAVE MORE!!!![/glow]
|
|
|
Post by wishiwasbeastgirl on Oct 20, 2005 9:38:32 GMT -5
My fic is hopelessly and pathetically stupid. Should I keep doing it or is it not even worth it?
|
|
raven100
Likes BB/R.
my pic relatez 2 my life! is there any 1 4 me?
Posts: 17
|
Post by raven100 on Apr 12, 2006 4:38:50 GMT -5
u better write more or i will hunt u down and KILL you if u dont finish this story! KIL you i say!
|
|
|
Post by Moonchild10 on Jun 2, 2006 12:57:45 GMT -5
Yes, write more! I think it's awesome! ^_^ So very angsty! And I thought I was the only person who liked writing in 2nd peson POV *high-fives*
Please write more?
|
|