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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Aug 16, 2005 10:51:02 GMT -5
Post all your love poems here.
By the way, if your poem is sad and about love, i dont mind if you post it in both. that is the only acception.
I got one.
FORGET ME NOT, pt. 1
Music blaring on the radio
Still hear the sound of your voice
I bleed when our song comes on
Take away the pain by drowning out the sound...
Earplugs in, all is quiet
But I can still recall the words to our song
Knowing the words makes it more painful
And singing them still makes me cry.
"Goodbye to you...
Goodbye to everything I thought I knew...
You were the one I loved...
The one thing that I tried to hold on to..."
You left me in this forsaken town all alone
To take on high school by yourself
Still leaving me here for 8th grade
And while I hate myself and you for going, I love you.
Make my life turn around
Come back through the school gates
I promise although it's Summer
I'll meet you there on Monday.
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Post by sphinx on Sept 2, 2005 13:30:51 GMT -5
;Dthat was awesome
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Sept 2, 2005 19:38:02 GMT -5
lol, thank you... nothing much, really... but thanks.
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imaginaryworld
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"Was" down the street from Johnny Depp. :(
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Post by imaginaryworld on Sept 3, 2005 12:09:58 GMT -5
IT WAS BEUATIFUL!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Sept 3, 2005 15:44:32 GMT -5
heheheh, ill try.
its just i wrote then when i [thought] i was in love.
and now that we're not together anymore... =[
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Sept 11, 2005 19:50:31 GMT -5
This is a loves sucks poem but oh well... its still a love poem!
NOW DO YOU GET IT?
I'm laying here writing my heart out for you
Try my very hardest not to die...
But you're out havin' fun
While I'm not even on your mind.
Is this the burden of love?
Or a new game you like to play with me?
If love is tears and fake flowers
And chocolate your ex gave you last year
Then you're madly in love with me...
Nothing will ever tear us apart -
Except this rip in the bottom of the page
And the whole beside it burned from tears.
My blood stains the next page
As you forget my name...
You're so vain I almost
didn't like watching it slowly drip...
I still don't understand if love
Is the battlefield or the victory,
But if you think I'm going down
Alone or silently, you're crazy, too.
I'm so sorry I didn't call last night, sweetie.
I've been a little confused lately.
While you were out breaking my heart,
I was deciding whether to try and call your cell phone
Or just speedial Hell, instead.
Saying this is love makes me ahte the world.
I don't wanna try this again,
But I'm jaded enough, don't you think?
"You love me."
"I'm perfectly fine."
Both statements are lies we constantly tell one-another,
That way we have the inspiration needed into fooling eachother
Into thinking that this is my problem again, tomorrow.
Everytime you lie and cheat, you're saying
"I love you so much that I'm going to make you suffer
Just so I can laugh at your face when you fall and I'm not there
To catch you."
And while you "Crazy about me,"
I'm going CRAZY trying to find an easier way
To kill myself...
Blood is red
The sky is blue
You see my dying but
You still don't have a clue...
Loves bites HARD so make sure you kick it and run,
Otherwise it'll try crawling back...
Then when you finally let it in again,
It bites you SO DAMN HARD that you're
Scared of it for life.
Now do you get it?
"Hate" is "love" when you turn it inside-out and beat it up.
- - -
Critisize me
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Sept 13, 2005 17:38:43 GMT -5
No really, critisize me. I need and want it.
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Post by Mauser on Sept 13, 2005 17:49:58 GMT -5
I can't critisize you, that was great. I couldn't find anything that needed to be critisized.
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Sept 13, 2005 17:52:51 GMT -5
Thanks =]
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imaginaryworld
BB/R super lover
"Was" down the street from Johnny Depp. :(
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Post by imaginaryworld on Sept 14, 2005 16:26:50 GMT -5
Cool poem!
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Sept 16, 2005 16:58:06 GMT -5
Thanks. =]
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Post by JesFriendMagnet on Sept 20, 2005 18:37:47 GMT -5
This poem is not by me!
I dunno who its by.. my friend found it online and i loved it.
When I Loved You,
The world was a brighter place,
My burdens weren't so heavy
And I could laugh and sing
And dance and play.
I felt special
Lying there in your arms.
So that no matter what I faced,
I knew I could make it through,
With you beside me,
Holding my hand,
Lifting me up
When I didn't have the strength to stand.
An emotional oneness
Shared by two hearts
That made life worth living
That made my world complete.
But when you walked away,
My burdens grew quite heavy,
Almost more than I could bear.
And now once again I must walk alone,
While my heart yearns
For When I Loved You.
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imaginaryworld
BB/R super lover
"Was" down the street from Johnny Depp. :(
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Post by imaginaryworld on Nov 13, 2005 12:37:06 GMT -5
*claps* It's so pretty! Write some soon when you get the chance! ^^
It's called, "Yellow Rose".
In this feild of red roses, and the two yellow roses shine on my face.
I fell asleep for so long thinking that I'm in your arms cradeling back and forth.
You gave me something so lovely.
You placed it on my lap.
The sweet aroma made me weak, and I fell back into your arms while wishing on a yellow rose, like the stars in the sky at night.
I see the first flowers you gave me, the yellow roses so delicately placed perfect.
I put them in my room, they seemed to last forever under any kind of weather.
I went back into my bed and watched the roses at night bloom their final bud, and I seemed to love you more, once again I heard you at my door, and let you in.
You held me in your arms.
I felt like this moment could never end, at least that's what I thought.
I opened my eyes, seeing the red roses no more, and one yellow rose.
I knew that I was now alone......
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Post by )**..(Namine)..**( on Dec 13, 2005 19:35:55 GMT -5
these poems are so glorious and joyous...I have one I thought of writing for awhile..well here I go!
broken inside
I was so happy around you..
you respected me for who I was..
But after you left me for her
I was never the same..
Until the next generation came..
I found you and said to you..
uh huh..okay..what new
screw you..
learning to fly
Learning to fly
Far far away..
I can no longer stay..
I can no longer apear her
But someday they will pay
there a lil' short..please do not flame..
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imaginaryworld
BB/R super lover
"Was" down the street from Johnny Depp. :(
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Post by imaginaryworld on Dec 14, 2005 19:58:05 GMT -5
That was a pretty poem! You should write more. Your great anastasia!!!
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